In this blog, I will be creating multiple quick sketches of the human body, anatomy, costumes, etc. The class that this is for is called Cafe Sketch at the Columbus College of Art and Design; feel free to browse and comment at your leisure!
Nov 5, 2012
Nationwide & North Market
Most of these were in North Market since it was pretty uneventful at the Nationwide Arena.
The drawing of the woman with her back turned is your best drawing here in my opinion. The action still reads clearly even from the back view, partly because of the way you have drawn her hand holding the container. Some additional drawing of the setting around her would help a little more too. I also like the guy going up the stairs, but the front leg on the girl reading looks a little awkward. Maybe darken which leg is front to help separate it in space from her back leg.
I agree with jake, nice job showing the action of the girl in the bottom middle. To add to what he mentioned about the line weight, I would apply it to your future sketches wherever you can - where there is more weight, make darker lines as compared to where there is less weight. Your skills in figure drawing/understanding of human figure is already so prominent - now it's just a matter of adding as much dimension as possible
The drawing of the woman with her back turned is your best drawing here in my opinion. The action still reads clearly even from the back view, partly because of the way you have drawn her hand holding the container. Some additional drawing of the setting around her would help a little more too. I also like the guy going up the stairs, but the front leg on the girl reading looks a little awkward. Maybe darken which leg is front to help separate it in space from her back leg.
ReplyDeleteI agree with jake, nice job showing the action of the girl in the bottom middle. To add to what he mentioned about the line weight, I would apply it to your future sketches wherever you can - where there is more weight, make darker lines as compared to where there is less weight. Your skills in figure drawing/understanding of human figure is already so prominent - now it's just a matter of adding as much dimension as possible
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