Attached is the series of moves of a typical vampire action (a swipe and to retrieve blood from the neck by biting). I got the first two poses from the trailer of "Abe Lincoln Vampire Slayer" and the third final sequence from "Bled". These were done quickly.
Jordan,
ReplyDeleteI like that you are working in close-up, as well as the medium shot. I would have liked to see some full-figure gestures for your character.
While your line weight is really nice and the development of form is good, take a look at the silhouettes of your characters - how dynamic are they? 2 of the top activity's drawings have a lot of foreshortening in them - hey look more like in-betweens, rather than key poses of an action - and the the first drawing's arm is too straight - bend it either way or take it up to its maximum anticipation point. The bottom activity has good follow through to it.